http://yoonyuljetiftw.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] yoonyuljetiftw.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] surgicalfocus 2013-01-04 06:30 pm (UTC)

oh where to start! i love the idea of this starting out about two crazy teenagers wanting to go to the school dance together, and then it just blossoms into this wonderful story about fear, dependency, and the bad and good things humans do to each other. baekkie as damsel in distress and chanyeol as knight in shining armor never get old.

i love your dialogue-- baekkie's snarkiness and chan's loveableness was a treat a read ^^

btw, that is such a lovely song.

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