Date: 2013-03-07 01:30 am (UTC)
You know, I agree with you, and in retrospect I really regret that about this story. I totally rushed it for the last aideshou challenge and it could have been so much better if I'd taken more time to think it out and write it. A good idea, perhaps, but not so well-executed.. although I think what it lacks in development it makes up for with heart, so I'll settle for that I guess. I'll just put it down to a learning experience. Thanks so much for reading and commenting, and I'm glad you liked it in any case xx
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